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Now, the upcoming battle horn sounded. 
     现在,战斗的号角即将吹响。
     Perhaps you will feel uneasy, because the fall time. Two feet of the trip. Three of the collision. So easily does not help confidence in despair. But 
We know that all your future is to enable a more smooth way. 
    也许你们会有些不安,因为一次的跌倒。两次的绊足。三次的相撞。让信心轻易地在无助中绝望。但
我们知道,所有的一切都是为了使你们今后的路更加平坦。
     Perhaps you will feel lonely, because the track is too long marathon, desperately teeth, but can not see the front end. However, we Canal 
Letter, you will be traversed by the wind into the footsteps of a legend, together with style, a motto. 
     也许你们会觉得孤单,因为马拉松的赛道太过漫长,拼命地咬牙,却看不到终点在前方。但我们坚
信,你们走过的足迹都将风化成一个传说,一道风采,一句格言。
     In fact, a brief exam review, however, excellent review of the soldiers has always been faced with standing up, and now you on the foot of the bullets, 
Well back pack, what reasons, do not give ourselves a smile confidently into the examination room. 
    其实高考不过一次简短的阅兵,优秀的士兵面对检阅从来都是挺起胸膛,而现在的你们上足了子弹,
背好了行囊,又有什么理由,不给自己一个微笑,满怀信心地步入考场。
     This June will be beautiful, because you will pass through a vast golden wheat fields to harvest their own dreams of the young, regardless of success or failure should be proud to raise one's arm and shouting "no regrets of youth"! 
     这个六月将会是美丽的,因为你们将穿过一大片金色的麦田,去收获自己年轻的梦想.不论成败,都应当自豪地振臂
高呼“青春无悔”!
     Phoenix Nirvana ashes reborn after five hundred years, and now in front of one meter is far from paradise, keep it up, every effort will be more 
One more self-confidence to allow their own reasons, you do the final sprint, we are here waiting for your triumphant return.
     凤凰涅磐五百年后浴火重生,而现在前方一米远的地方就是天堂,继续努力吧,每多一分的努力都会
让自己多一个自信的理由,做最后的冲刺吧,我们在这儿等着你们的凯旋.
    Congratulations to you through this training, to mature to congratulate you and wish you a beautiful play Halo. 
     祝贺你们经历这场磨练,祝贺你们走向成熟,预祝你们的最后一战打得漂亮。
     In fact, one meter long but heaven can come to embrace the sun.
     其实,不过一米远的天堂,走过了就可以拥抱阳光。

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2009-06-04 回答
Now, (the horn of a battle is going to be made a sound. )
现在,战斗的号角即将吹响。
Perhaps you will feel uneasy, because the fall time(once you fall down). Two feet (times)of the trip. Three of the collision. (Making confidence easily be despair with helpless). But 
We (all)know that  (all the things we did just for making the road of your future more smooth)
也许你们会有些不安,因为一次的跌倒。两次的绊足。三次的相撞。让信心轻易地在无助中绝望。但
我们知道,所有的一切都是为了使你们今后的路更加平坦。
Perhaps you will feel lonely, because the track of( a marathon is too long), desperately (grit your teeth), but (you)can not see (the end ahead). However, we (believe that)  (the footprint you’ve ever passed would change wind into a legend),(a impressive sight and a great saying.)
也许你们会觉得孤单,因为马拉松的赛道太过漫长,拼命地咬牙,却看不到终点在前方。但我们坚
信,你们走过的足迹都将风化成一个传说,一道风采,一句格言。
In fact, (college entrance exam is just a brief check), however, that excellent (soldiers face to the check is always squaring their shoulders), and now(you’ve filled with shots in your own guns)
(and worn you bags well), (There is no reason why you don’t give yourself a smile, with great confidence get into the examinatorial location其实高考不过一次简短的阅兵,优秀的士兵面对检阅从来都是挺起胸膛,而现在的你们上足了子弹,
背好了行囊,又有什么理由,不给自己一个微笑,满怀信心地步入考场。
This June will be beautiful, because you will pass through a vast golden wheat fields to (obtain) your own dreams, regardless of success or failure,you should be proud to raise your arm and shouting "no regrets of youth"! 
这个六月将会是美丽的,因为你们将穿过一大片金色的麦田,去收获自己年轻的梦想.不论成败,都应当自豪地振臂
高呼“青春无悔”!
Phoenix Nirvana ashes reborn after five hundred years, and now in front of one meter is far from paradise, keep it up, every effort will be more 
One more self-confidence to allow their own reasons, you do the final sprint, we are here waiting for your triumphant return.
凤凰涅磐五百年后浴火重生,而现在前方一米远的地方就是天堂,继续努力吧,每多一分的努力都会

Congratulations to you through this training, to mature to congratulate you and wish you a beautiful play Halo. 
In fact, one meter long but heaven can come to embrace the sun.