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灯光昏暗,舞台上有一种神秘的气氛。
男孩南跌跌撞撞地走上舞台,茫然地环顾四周。
南:我这是在哪儿?为什么我什么都看不清楚?
这时,舞台另外一侧走上一个女孩小雨。
小雨:你是在你的梦里。
南抬头看向小雨:小雨?你怎么会在这里?这里是我的梦?为什么我会在我的梦里?
小雨:你从该来的地方来,并且,你会在你的梦里找到答案。
南茫然地四顾,不停地摇着头,似乎无法相信这一切。
小雨:看看你的胸口。
南低头。
南:我的胸口?
突然他惊讶地大叫,同时脸上出现无比恐怖的神色。
南;我的心呢?我的心怎么不见了?为什么我的胸口只剩下一个黑漆漆的洞口?
小雨冷冷地看着他。

灯光骤然明亮。
南:啊——(大叫)
南满头大汗地从梦里醒来。
同寝室的老北被他惊醒。
老北:我说你这小子不是又做什么春梦了吧?
南余悸未消,按着自己的胸口:我梦到小雨了。
老北:小雨……(陷入沉思)
南:我还梦到我的心没有了,真的,它只剩下了一个空洞!
老北:(似乎也被他吓到了)别乱说话,快睡觉睡觉!明天还要领毕业证书呢!
南傻坐在床上,没有回答,他的思绪似乎又飘回了半年之前。

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Oo熊へへ 10级
2009-03-13 回答
With the dim light, the atmosphere on the stage is mysterious. 
The boy, Nan is staggering on the stage. He look around at a loss.
Nan: Where am I? Why I don't know where I am?
At that time, a girl named Xiao Yu is walking onto the stage on the other side.
Xiao Yu: You are in your dream.
Nan looks up and stares at Xiao Yu: Xiao Yu? Why are you here? It my dream. Then why I am in my dream?
Xiao Yu: You came from the place you should have come. And, you will find the answer in your dream.
Nan is still at a loss, keep shaking his head. It seems like he can not believe all of this.
Xiao Yu: Take a look at your chest.
Nan bowed his head.
Nan: My chest?
Suddenly, he starts to scream! At the same time, an extremely terrified look appear on his face. 
Nan: Where is my heart? Why is my heart disppeared? Why there is just a black hole in my chest??
Xiao Yu looks at him coldly.

The lights suddenly become very bright.
Nan: Ah..... (shouting...)
Nan wake up from his dream with sweat all over his forehead.
His roomate Lao Bei was awaken by his scream.
Lao Bei: Hey, are you having a spring dream again?
Nan is still terrified. He pressed on his chest: I dreamed of Xiao Yu.
Lao Bei: Xiao Yu... (Lao Bei is lost in his thoughts)
Nan: I also dreamed that my heart was gone. For real, the only thing left was just a blank hole.
Lao Bei:(seems to be shocked by him) Don't say that! You should sleep now! You will get the graduation certification tomorrow!
Nan is sitting on the bed looks stupid. He didn't reply. His thoughts go back to the time half a year ago.