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我想让你们这些高手来翻译两篇文章一定重酬
在翻译之前想问一点问题 1叹为观止的英文是否是acclaim as the peak of perfection还有分毫不差是不是可以用perfectness表示
一丝不苟的单词是不是meticulosity
还有一个问题begrudge还有envy,green-eyed monster,grudge,jealousness这些都是嫉妒的意思那他们有什么区别吗 好了 开始帮我翻译吧但是还有一个请求我英语不好请在一些很难的单词上提醒一下汉语意思

第一篇中国人的发展真快啊!连我都不敢想这是他们中国的工程师创造的宏伟业绩.连我国著名的工程师都不感轻易尝试的艰巨工程,詹天佑先生他居然做得分毫不差,一丝不苟.真是让人叹为观止呀!这能不让外国的工程师羡慕吗?不,简直就是嫉妒.
第二篇 是 我的数学将如高斯般敏锐,如陈景润般缜密,而我则如卡笛尔般伟大. 我那优美的文字将传遍世界各地,如流水般清澈,如一切美丽的事物沁透人心,以独特的风格独占世界一角.我的英语将说得比所有的美国播音员都还准.在不久的将来我确信我可以进入harvard university就读,并且获得全额奖学金让我父母为我骄傲让中国为我骄傲.
如果可以的话 请把一些关键句型写下 谢谢
问题补充  2008-03-20 23:47
第一个人回答得还不行啊
匿名 回答:6 人气:200 解决时间:2008-04-04 19:03
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问题解析:

1、“叹为观止”可以用acclaim as the peak of perfection,但amazing比较地道和常用
2、“分毫不差”可以用perfectness
3、“一丝不苟”可以用meticulosity
4、be grudge含有“怨恨”的意思;envy除了“嫉妒”也可以表示“羡慕”;green-eyed monster是个俗语,一般用在口语中;jealous含有“吃醋,猜疑”的意思。

地道英文翻译:
1、How fast the Chinese develops!I just can't believe those were great achievements Chinese engineers have created.Mr. Zhan Tianyou managed the arduous engineer which famous engineers in our national won't strike off with perfectness and meticulosity.It was amazing! Won't the foreign engineers envy him? No,they're almost jealous!
2、My mathmetics would be as acute as Gauss,as meticulous as Chen Jingrun,and I'll be as great as Cardel. My graceful words would spread all over the world just as clear as stream,as refreshing as any beautiful things,and be exclusive in the world with a unique style.My English would be more standard than any American broadcaster.In the near future I believe I would study at harvard university,and win full scholarship,my parents would be proud of me,and China would be proud of me.

关键句型:
1. How fast the Chinese develops!中国发展的多么快啊!
这是一个感叹句,句型是“how+形容词+主谓”

2.Won't the foreign engineers envy him? No,they're almost jealous!这能不让外国的工程师羡慕吗?不,简直就是嫉妒.
这是一个反问句,句型是“否定词+主谓”,自问自答

3.My graceful words would spread all over the world just as clear as stream,as refreshing as any beautiful things,and be exclusive in the world with a unique style.我那优美的文字将传遍世界各地,如流水般清澈,如一切美丽的事物沁透人心,以独特的风格独占世界一角.
这是多重排比句,其中的be exclusive in表示“独占”
2008-03-21 10:32
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本人翻译:
第一篇
How fast the development of Chinese people are!(使用感叹句型.How+形容词+主语+谓语!) I can't believe that this is Chinese engineers who make such a great and tremendous achievement, even the famous engineers in China can not easily engage in this arduous(艰巨的,困难的) project. Mr. Zhan Tianyou could unexpectedly finish it in a careful and thoroughgoing way without any errors. What an extraordinary achievement it is!(使用感叹句型What+a/an+形容词+it+is!) Can't it make foreign engineers envy? No, it exacly make them envy!

第二篇
My ability of learning maths is as keen as Gauss' and my thought of it is as delicated as Chen Jingrun's, so I am as great as Cardier. My beautiful and romantic words will be conveyed and transferred to different places in the world. They are clear and moving just like water and any wonderful momery, which are specialized by uniqueness in the world. I will speak fluent and accurate English as those American broadcasters do. In the near future, I am convicted that my would enter and study in Harvard University and get a scholarship, which make my parents and my country proud of me.

PS:第二篇没有什么关键句型,就用定语从句而已.
2008-03-21 09:10
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叹为观止Amazing分毫不差Banhaobucha一丝不苟Meticulously中国人的发展真快啊!连我都不敢想这是他们中国的工程师创造的宏伟业绩.连我国著名的工程师都不感轻易尝试的艰巨工程,詹天佑先生他居然做得分毫不差,一丝不苟.真是让人叹为观止呀!这能不让外国的工程师羡慕吗?不,简直就是嫉妒.China's development really Kuaia! I do not even to think this is their Chinese engineers to create a magnificent performance. Even well-known engineers are not easy to sense the daunting project, Zhan Tianyou, he had done Banhaobucha, meticulous . people really amazing! This can not help foreign engineers envy? No, it is jealousy.I Gaussian math would be as sharp as if Chenjingrun as careful, but I like cards as great now Seoul. Beautiful characters that I will be spread around the world, such as clear as water, as all the beautiful things Qin Permeability people, a unique style exclusive World iceberg my English will say that the United States than all the broadcasters are also potential in the near future I am sure that I can access harvard university students, and receive a full scholarship to my parents for me proud as I am proud to China
2008-03-20 23:43
我很菜  尽最大力了

a cclaim as the peak of perfection 意思是赞美 感叹到极致 顶峰

meticulosity 是一丝不苟

envy,green-eyed monster,grudge,jealousness 这些有些是口语用的多 有的我也没见过
第一段:Chinese's development is really quick! I do not dare to think that this is the grand achievement which their China's engineer creates. Our country renowned engineers do not feel the arduous project which attempts easily, Mr. Zhan Tianyou he do unexpectedly exactly right, meticulous. Really lets the human praise to the heavens! This can not let the foreign country engineer envies? No, is simply envies.

第二段:my mathematics like Gauss will be keen, if Chen Jingrun is meticulous, but my like card flute is great. I that exquisite writing will spread over the world, if the running water is limpid, if all beautiful things seep thoroughly the will of the people, monopolizes world one jiao by the unique style. My English will say compared to all American radio announcers also. In the near future I believed firmly that I may enter harvard university to go study, and obtains the sum total scholarship to let my parents let China for me be arrogant arrogantly for me.
2008-03-21 01:05
I tried my best to help you and there are my answers to your questions:

the first sentence is:

What the fast development China has!Even i can not believe all the miracles are created by Chinese enginers.As famous engineers in my country,they dare not try to taste the formidable projects.Mr Zhantianyou did it metiallosity and let it became perfect.All acclaimed as the peak of perfection.The foreign engineers will admire this,aren't they?of course,even jealous.

the second sentence is :

Of course,my math ability will acuity like Gauss and meticulous like Chenjingrun,If turn to me,i will be as great as Cardel.
My gorgeous words would flourished around the world.Like other wonderful things,they will penetrate deeply into people's heart.Using unique style,they will be exclusive in the world.My English will become better than the most famous American broadcaster and i am sure i can enter to the Harvard University in my future and gain the scholarship.My parents will feel proud of me as well as China,my lovely country!

Hope you can like it,and i am not professional,but i tried my best!so hope we can exchange our idea in the future!
2008-03-21 13:02
第一句是: 

如何快速发展,中国!即使我不能相信所有的奇迹,是中国人制造的enginers.as著名工程师在我的国家,他们也不敢尝试浅尝厉害projects.mr zhantianyou没有metiallosity让它成为perfect.all被誉为高峰perfection.the外籍工程师将佩服这一点,不是吗?当然,即使嫉妒。

第二句是:

当然,我的数学能力就会像视力高斯细致chenjingrun一样,如果谈的话,我会被作为大cardel 。
我的华丽的话,将兴盛周围world.like其他美好的事物,他们将深入到人们的heart.using独特的风格,他们将独家在world.my英语将成为优于最有名的美国广播公司,我深信我可以进入哈佛大学,在今后赢得scholarship.my家长会觉得我为荣,以及中国,我可爱的国家!

希望你能喜欢,我不是专业的,但我尝试我的最好的!所以希望我们可以交流我们的理念,在未来!
2008-03-21 16:16