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My Happy Holiday
During Workers’ Day, I was very happy. Because I could do anything I want.
The first day, I watched TV. Then, I played with my classmates .We talked about this holiday and laughed. We were very happy. In the noon, I had lunch and went to bed. Later, I did my homework. After supper, I played with my friends.
The second day, we played badminton. We were hot and happy. After breakfast, I did my homework. Then, I listened to the music and played computer games.
The third day, mom and I visited my grandmother and grandfather. And I helped them to do some housework. My uncle, aunt, brother and I went to work on the farm. We put the beans in the ground. It was not an easy job. I felt tired, but very happy. And I ate much food for lunch. In the afternoon, I went back home. Then, I shopped with my mom. My mother bought a watch for me. Mom, thank you! I like it very much!
Then, I needed the whole day to do my homework.
The fifth day, I watched TV and played games.
This holiday was very happy! I had a wonderful time! I liked my happy holiday!
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